The Fifteen Words
The Fifteen Words
A Nine Ashes Cozy Fantasy Short Story
By Ember Penrose
A standalone short story in The Elves of Nine Ashes. Read it in any order.
About This Story
Tove keeps eight hive boxes on the north track, past the second well, and she has never needed a second pair of hands out there. She can tell the weight of a full frame before it clears the rim. She can hear a hive change its mind half a tone before it does anything about it. What she cannot do — and will not pretend to do — is put any of it into words.
Then the village asks her to take an apprentice, and sends her a girl who narrates everything.
Pip is the miller’s niece. She arrives at a run with a notebook already out and a pencil on a string, and she has an opinion about the gate latch before she has touched it. She also keeps a column nobody has noticed, in which she counts every word her teacher spends on her.
Tove tries. On the second morning she teaches the way she has been asked to — in sentences, out loud, the full explanation — and the hive answers in the only language it has. Two stings. One cracked frame. Honey running down the side of a box, going nowhere, and nobody’s doing but her own.
What she finds afterwards is not a better explanation. It is the one hour a day the hive itself demands quiet, and everything she knows waiting inside it — in her hands, where it had been the whole time.
A cozy fantasy short story of Nine Ashes: an elven village of long lives and short conversations, where autumn arrives in the trees first and worries about the weather later, where a goat named Cask surveys the common from his wall, and where nobody makes an occasion of a second stool appearing beside the first.
No quests. No villains. No raised voices. Eight boxes, one girl, one season, and fifteen words.
For readers who loved: Travis Baldree, Becky Chambers, T. Kingfisher, Heather Fawcett, and Katherine Addison.
Nine Ashes Short Stories are standalone cozy fantasy short stories. Read in any order.
Tropes
- Elven Village
- Craft as Identity
- Low Stakes
- No Villain
- The Wisdom of Limits
- Mentorship Across Generations
Step Into Nine Ashes
The Elves of Nine Ashes
Nine novels. Nine short stories. One village with the kettle on.